Bonjour,je suis en 2nd générale et j'ai besoin d'une correcteur à mon expression écrite sur le conte de fée One afternoon,a logger.Once upon a time there was a

Bonjour,je suis en 2nd générale et j'ai besoin d'une correcteur à mon expression écrite sur le conte de fée "One afternoon,a logger.Once upon a time there was a woodcutter, father of Hansel and Gretel. Being a poor family, their mother-in-law said to leave Hansel and Gretel to her husband. The man obeys and puts them in the forest. The brother and the sister having a hunger, see a house in candy. The woman welcomes them with open arms in order to protect them from the brigands. She gives them to supper and a bed for the Crying at a witch trap, they flee to Dawn. Quickly, the Horde leader sees them and captures them, they immediately move into the house with the two children. Hansel and Gretel are adopted by the young couple. They lived happily together as a real family. Moral: Do not judge a person directly because appearances are misleading. "

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